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I read two poems which are very sad. I am thinking that I’ll write several lines to dispel the gloom.
The first sad poem is like this:
Looking up at the stars, I know quite well
That, for all they care, I can go to hell,
but on earth indifference is the least
We have to dread from man or beast.
And my response poem is:
The stars are burning intensely, billions of light years away, to send a little twinkle to men and beasts and me. That's not indifference, not disregard, but rather it's a passion to connect.
The second sad poem is like this:
To love and to remember; that is good;
To love and to forget; that is not well;
To lapse from love to hatred; that is hell…
And my response poem is:
When love has run its course, let it go; When love is gone, give a good cry and leave; When love turns to hatred but no way out-- manage it. If it is a hell, try to be the hell's best manager, while searching for the exit.
I really liked the poems and loved your contrasting responses. I hope you write more response poems in the future.
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Excellent responses! Don’t give up! 🤗🌹🙋♂️
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Loving the responses paired with the original pieces! Lovely writing. ❤
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Very talented!
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You are on a positivity roll!
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I like your versions a lot better.
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